Suzu Clan: Chapter 1.6

Suzu doubts an omen…

Weeks passed following the fire. Orion was summoned several more times to Lady Suzu’s chambers to be certain she would become pregnant. He wasn’t sure that was the real reason but he didn’t mind. He had pleasant thoughts about the time spent with Lady Suzu but he didn’t feel it was right to talk to Phoenix about it… not yet, at least.

The fire had been the topic of gossip throughout the community. What did this fire mean? Was it an omen of an approaching evil to their clan?

Suzu didn’t believe it one bit. She put on a front to the women of the community but personally she didn’t think it meant anything. Well, mostly. She still had a nagging thought that maybe it was a premonition of something happening in the future.

Tatiana was another story. She had yet to breach the subject of Phoenix fathering her child with Phoenix himself. It was her fault that the fire started…and his name was related to fire. To Tatiana it sounded like a warning and that scared her. She wondered if she should rethink her plan.

Phoenix and Orion felt pride from their defeat of the fire. Neither believed it was much of an omen. They wouldn’t say it aloud but it had been Tatiana’s foolishness for not extinguishing her incense when she went to bed. They decided to prepare for any future fires they would leave out more water buckets.

Bright one morning, Orion quietly ate his meal with the others.  Tatiana and Phoenix spoke to each other animatedly about something or other; Orion paid them no attention.

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That is, not until he heard Phoenix say “child”.

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He whipped his head around to look at the pair.

“What did you say?”

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Tatiana and Phoenix looked at each other excitedly and Tatiana answered him.

“Lady Suzu was feeling ill last night and asked me to fetch Lady Lakshmi after breakfast! We think she might be with child!” Orion felt his heart lift and he knew his face betrayed his feelings.

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Tatiana smiled at him knowingly. “You’ll have much to prepare for in the coming months…” She paused just long enough for Orion to look confused, then went on. “We will throw a celebration feast for the new heiress following her birth. You’ll need to prepare new and delicious meals so you had better get learning!”

Orion felt excited but also worried that so much planning for a heiress would be all for nothing if the child turned out to be a boy. Would they still celebrate then?

Following breakfast, Tatiana went to fetch Lady Lakshmi. She was both a gardener and midwife for her clan. A strange combination, you might think, but in the smaller clans of this community everyone carried many torches. Suzu also liked her very much so she felt comfortable in her presence.

Following the examination, Lady Lakshmi joined Suzu at the dining table to go over some advice for the remainder of her pregnancy.

“Lady, you are very healthy. If you continue to practice your meditation and exercise you will be fine. I will advise you to drink a potion we use in my clan.” Suzu looked surprised.


“It is only a drink mixture of fruit and herbs. It is very good for you and the baby. I will leave the recipe with your sister.”

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Suzu was pleased and began to rise; Lady Lakshmi stopped her.

“Wait, Lady. One more thing… About the fire you had…”

Suzu prevented herself from rolling her eyes and sat down again. Lady Lakshmi continued.

“You must be careful of who you bring into the clan… the future may seem to be smooth but you do not know who may shake that calm with their arrival…” Suzu looked at the older woman with disbelief; it was just a fire! Lady Lakshmi nodded again to emphasize. “Trust me, Lady. You will need to be very careful of who you allow to enter your clan once your attendant, Orion, leaves. Any new sisters as well. If you are not careful you may have turmoil in your future…”


  1. I like the way of thinking.
    Amazon: “There was a fire. It has to mean something.”
    Me: “Maybe Phoenix was just not careful enough?”
    Amazon: “No. It has to be an omen.”
    Me: “That he must be more careful in the future?”
    Amazon: “No. Something very bad will happen.” Yeah. Got it. xD
    Excited for a potential heiress! 😀

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    1. Loooool! Yah, Suzu puts up a front about her beliefs but I wonder if she’ll actually accept them as she becomes an elder. (Her elder birthday is too close for my taste!)


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